I hope the tutorial works out for you! Thanx fr watching as well!!

Thankyou for the faveee, and good luck in improving, if you are bored, look through my gallery, and you can see how I slowly improved over about 6 years

Time and practice is whatye need

thanks for the fav! ^^

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I hope the torso "How To" helps out some. >_~

would you guys rather read a comic in japanese or english?

Hello random deviant!

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ty for the watch dont forget about my advices

and let you hand more loose and sketch more , a lot more , daily if posible

use this tut [link]
i recommend it a lot

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Thank u very much for faving my tutorial ! I'll try to do a digital version in English of it asap ^^!

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thank you very much for the fav^^

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I'm Sasuke

at your age i did a lot of mistakes

argh the memories

well anyway move to shapes so you can work on 3dimensional

shapes spheres can give you control so try harder to use them

with this you can center facial features same for torso biceps and abs

well good lo´ yo

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Thanks for the fave

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Well, an update review. Your drawings are getting better, faces are better in proportion, however there is still room for improvement. The hair is what you need to improve on the most, but I won't give advice on that, since hair is what usually defines the style of drawing. Same goes for how the eyes and facial overall structure. So in other words, from there on out for faces, it's constant practice.

Moving out of faces, you'll need a few body structure tutorials. While I am not in an art block to be bored enough to make one, you'll have to poke around a bit. Well, I can recommend a book to you to help improve that. But that's it.

Here's the book if you're interested [link]

Anyways, you're still a ways off to begin drawing a full-fledged comic strip, so maybe doing mini-comics is better suited for now. Also, maybe writing the story to help get a better idea of events when you put it to paper is another thing you can do.

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Good idea! We'll burn birds!

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Well since I can't comment on the forum, here's to your first comment.

Stop making the manga, try again later. You're lacking HEAVILY in the basics. Basics for drawing manga style is...

People (faces, proportions, and the details of those, as well as poses and natural posture, and heaps of other stuff including angles and perspective)

Backgrounds (angles, perspectives, details, portraying environments and atmospheres, and simple architecture)

Characters (character designing, character differentiation, and clothing)

Your own style (every artist is stylised, you will gain your own style as you learn)

And basics for drawing the manga...

Materials (you'll need a G-Nib with ink, as well as correct paper, and you'll need to learn how to use them, technique and difference in using normal materials)

Panelling (learn to draw panels and laying them out properly, your panels have too much space)

Formatting (formatting your panels is important, as you want to get the message of what is happening across as effectively as possible, learn on sizes of panels, shapes of panels and how to use them)

Sound Effects (Sound effects give a sense of life into the manga, learn to use sound effects)

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Good idea! We'll burn birds!

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